Hi I thought i'd post 2 of my poems. I have been writing and i've tried many different styles. I don't however like how the come out. When i'm writing it feels right but when i'm done it feels offcenter. Anyways here they are.
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You and I are like two worlds
two seperate hemispheres
but joined by one
we are stuck together
you push me deeper down
but thats the way i like it
when i know i have felt it all
and I know its over
you make sure you give me a extra nudge to the bottom
and i have felt it all

love and hate are really brothers
the are the same emotion except twisted in the eys of god
they are made of the same ingreidants
then how did they come out tasting different?
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she feels nothing
when the sky falls down
nothing
when she's about to drown
nothing
when she gets beaten up
nothing
when she's about to give up
nothing
when the world tears in two
nothing
when she paints this scene
nothing
when she's blown up
nothing
when her gut's splatter the ground
nothing
when she sees her blood
nothing
when her brother is killed
nothing
when she's raped
nothing
when she's about to die
nothing
nothing