ooc: no, no, I'm back!
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A young (what? he's not old!) bum sleeping in an alleyway under a pile of raggy blankets. He held in one hand a knife, and the other a pocketwatch. Piperel Turner.
ooc: I thought it was Jake who'd taken Darius' watch...hehe, well, he did steal one earlier. (Have you read back a bit? Jake is basically the unlikeable version of Piperel. I'm trying to figure out how to make him more endearing.
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"Why, is he acting strange again?" James asked, addressing Shannon instead of Darius himself.