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08-23-2003, 02:20 AM

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Gnome

Join Date: Mar 2003

Location: Muggle world :(

Posts: 392

Good work! Nice rhyme; try to work on beat count on the 2nd stanza.

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If all the world were made of paper,
And all the sea of ink,
And all the trees were bread and cheese,
What would we have to drink?

08-23-2003, 02:20 AM	#5 (permalink)
noseinabook Gnome Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Muggle world :( Posts: 392	Good work! Nice rhyme; try to work on beat count on the 2nd stanza. __________________ If all the world were made of paper, And all the sea of ink, And all the trees were bread and cheese, What would we have to drink?