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Originally posted by past_present_future_hermione1357@Jun 6 2004, 04:20 PM
Thanks soo much! and ur a good writer I loved Alone at Home espeiciely(sp) Quote:
I liked the most the good/evil annalogy with the glances.
did you know thats my least favorite poem? I think it isnt as good as some of my others.... but everyone loves it! I guess Im not good at judging my poetry.......
and the last poem isnt exactley true, although my father is a ...... well lets just say not a "happy" person........ and he yells alot my mom wants to divorce but cant aford it right now..... but most of it fictional... i do know kids who parents used to beat them though so I think that that poem came from friends expierences(sp) Thank you very much about my poetry comment^^
lol, I guess it's because it shows a lot of tension, of passion, and the ending gives a kind of humor-reliever. Plus, if looked closely we can assume it's a kind of pharadox (sp?) because, diverting the glance was loosing, but on your rules, and you say *good* wins, meaning that *you* are the good
The poem says much in so little (quantity of) words. And it also talks about the culture speaking though you: the vision of believing you are the good, and your enemy the evil is a common thing in culture ideologies (say, in war, if you are inside it your country is always the good-ones, the ones that are *right*, and the other the Evil; while when you are outside it -you country is not compromissed or part of the war- one could consider them as humans, hence neutral, hence there's no good nor evil and NO one is right)
I'm so sorry to hear about your friends' parents, and about your problems with your father (as a matter of fact I have a friend which has a very similar problem to yours). I can imagine it's hard. I really hope that's going better now.
I think your friend's poem is really nice (lack of better word, because it's greatly writen, but so depressing and shocking) and shows a passion that is great for an artist.... *sigh* but, again, is so depressing. I really -for a personal reason- don't like the *suicide* theme, and I hate it when people talk about cutting wrists (I cannot help shudder)
Your last poem wasn't getting any happier, though wroten in a funny-like way. Ah, I'm too sensive to write a proper review... plus I've worshiped your socks too much, I believe. Be Nice to your Headmaster's Socks!
Nadia CR