Okay... Again a different way to view something...

This time the fight outside when Harry and Ron arrive:

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"NO BOYS! NO BACK INSIDE!"

"NO. WE'RE FIGHTING MR WEASLEY!"

"HARRY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?"

"FIGHTING! IT'S MY FAULT THEY'RE HERE LUPIN!"

"STUPEFY!"

"CRUCIO!"

"PROGETO!"

"CRUCI-"

"EXPELLIARMUS!"

"POTTER! DON'T YOU ME HURTING YOUR PRETTY LITTLE FRIEND HERE?"

"NOT REALLY! LUNA, RUN!"

"AVADA-"

"STUPEFY!"

"ARTHUR! BEHIND YOU!"

"CRUCIO!"

"UP AND OVER!"

"HAGRID? WHAT ARE YOU DOING?"

"PROGETO"

"GETTIN' RID OF THE STUNNED ONES RON! DON'T WANNA FALL OVER 'EM!"

"AVADA-"

"NO! EXPELLIARMUS!"

"OW! HARRY!"

"STUPEFY!"

"SORRY RON!"

"WELL, WELL, WELL... POTTER AND WEASLEY... SURROUNDED... SOUNDS LIKE FUN"

"When I say, stun them"

"WHAT'D YOU WHISPERING POTTER!"

"NOW! STUPEFY!"

"STUPEFY"

"CRUCIO!"

"EXPELLIARMUS!"

"AVADA KEDARVA!"

"MUM DUCK!"

CRACK

"THAT'S MY KITCHEN WINDOW!"

"STUPEFY!"

"CRUCIO"

"EXPELLIARMUS!"

"AVADA-

"REMEMBER THAT YOUR MASTER WANTS ME ALIVE!"

POP

"WHERE'D HE GO?"

POP

"Huh? Why'd they leave?

"RON!"

"Yeah?"

"LUNA? DEAN? SEAMUS?"

"Yes Harry?"

"DEAN'S OUT COLD!"

"What?"

"Okay... I'm going inside..."

"Right with ya!"

"GINNY? HERMIONE?"

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Tell me what'd ou think of the different ways of writing!

Abi...xox