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fallen-angel · 08-11-2008, 02:45 PM

I don't like this one, or any of these , mainly because I had to cut them to 100 words.

I muh prefer them on my Fanfiction.net acount anyway . . .

36. Muggles

Five year old Narcissa was sat in the leaky cauldron as her mother argued with a Mudblood. She stared at the door for a while. She had always wondered what was on the other side.
She looked up at her mother to check she wasn’t looking, slipped off her chair and walked out the door.
A woman soon noticed her alone so walked up to her “Where’s your mummy?” she asked Narcissa as she stared at her. She took her hand “We’ll find her.”
There was a scream. Narcissa was whipped up into her mother’s arms. “Filthy muggle!” Druella spat.

08-11-2008, 02:45 PM	#4 (permalink)
fallen-angel George's Ear Jarvey Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Southampton/England Posts: 562 Hogwarts RPG Name: Narisa Carter First Year	I don't like this one, or any of these , mainly because I had to cut them to 100 words. I muh prefer them on my Fanfiction.net acount anyway . . . 36. Muggles Five year old Narcissa was sat in the leaky cauldron as her mother argued with a Mudblood. She stared at the door for a while. She had always wondered what was on the other side. She looked up at her mother to check she wasn’t looking, slipped off her chair and walked out the door. A woman soon noticed her alone so walked up to her “Where’s your mummy?” she asked Narcissa as she stared at her. She took her hand “We’ll find her.” There was a scream. Narcissa was whipped up into her mother’s arms. “Filthy muggle!” Druella spat.