 Only Forgiveness - Sa16+
ok this is a remit/redo of unvalidated story changed to better fit the rules even complete with a new name. this is my first fan fic though not my first go at one so here goes !
Chapter one:
Harry and Ginny on honeymoon Ron and Hermione in London.
“So what do you think of Paris Ginny?” as they sat on the balcony outside there room facing the Eiffel tower “it’s beautiful, I can’t believe were going home tomorrow though” she replied turning to face him, “but we do get to go to our new house, are you sure your ok to live so close to my mother?”Harry laughed “I love your parents, and I love you she may be protective of you but I know she trusts me with your life and I know you were willing enough to give it to me” “well that’s good enough for me considering you did save me and the wizarding world a couple of times” she said smiling and sipping from a glass of red wine, “only a couple” he said laughing.
“I love you Harry” “I love you too and nothings gonna change that not even living close to your mum” Ginny laughed “how do you think Ron and Hermione have got on without us?” asked Harry “well they haven’t spoken since he proposed and she said no and they never even looked at each other at the wedding so I don’t think its going well” replied Ginny
“Do you know why Hermione said no?” carried on Harry
“Yes but I think you’d better ask her rather then me, I’ve been sworn to secrecy”
“It can’t be that bad” said Harry giving her a look of disbelief
“Trust me it is but I cant say any more not even to you im afraid you’ll have to ask her, honestly I don’t know why you hadn’t asked her sooner” Harry looked down at the city below “I suppose its cause you take of Hermione and Im there for Ron, but even he wouldn’t tell me his face glazed over and his ears went red when I asked so I thought it better not to bring it up again!” “We can help them when we get back but for now let’s enjoy our last night here” Said Ginny putting her empty glass on the table and walking over to him finally sitting on his lap, “and how do you propose we do that” said Harry looking into her eyes with a smile on his face and leaned in to kiss her.
*****
Ron lay wake staring at the ceiling, the window was open due to the recent hot weather and a breeze swept through the room. He was thinking only seeing those big brown eyes staring back. He loved her so much and it took losing her to see it. He loved her no matter what, which made him feel disgusted when he thought of what she had done to him. He loved her but she had kissed someone else, some one he could never forgive her for, Malfoy.
Hermione sat up pulling her self from her nightmare. She was tangled in her sheets and drenched with cold sweat. His eyes were a comfort to her until he changed they had become cold once more, grey and vicious. He had tried to strangle her but Ron had been there, he had grasped her arm looked at her with love and a cheeky smile until he let go and she fell into darkness. She got up and sat by the open window, the breeze on her skin, her tears falling, she looked out at London around her and glanced at her clock.
Please tell me what u think about this for a first chapter….
Last edited by Ozzy; 08-03-2008 at 10:15 AM.
Reason: Real post date 8/03/08. Old version switched out from accidetally deleted new thread version.
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