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MUSTANG SALLY · 07-14-2008, 08:49 PM

Wow!

Ive just found this and all I can say is...wow!

You are a great writer!

I love to stalk the FF thread, but I usually dont find storys that are worth commenting on. I mean I know we are all learners here I guess you can say, but you writing is really good. You have great grammer, paragraph structures and an interesting plot. I tried to find a mistake somewhere, but I didnt find one anywhere.

Raven is described with great detail. I can see her in my head. And when the reader can see what you can see, you did an awesome job. You also did good canon wise. Well except the fact that Raven is there. But that is what the story is about

I will for sure be stalking this FF

Cant wait for your next entry.

*Steph*

07-14-2008, 08:49 PM	#4 (permalink)
MUSTANG SALLY SS 100 Triumphant Kappa Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Top Ramen plz? Posts: 13,082 Hogwarts RPG Name: Danny Logan Edwards Sixth Year x1	Shipper Queen Hippie Quad Wow! Ive just found this and all I can say is...wow! You are a great writer! I love to stalk the FF thread, but I usually dont find storys that are worth commenting on. I mean I know we are all learners here I guess you can say, but you writing is really good. You have great grammer, paragraph structures and an interesting plot. I tried to find a mistake somewhere, but I didnt find one anywhere. Raven is described with great detail. I can see her in my head. And when the reader can see what you can see, you did an awesome job. You also did good canon wise. Well except the fact that Raven is there. But that is what the story is about I will for sure be stalking this FF Cant wait for your next entry. Steph __________________