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Krysta · 07-14-2008, 11:56 AM

Hello!

Well I'm all caught up. I read it this morning, because I'm sick and didn't go into work. (lots of sympathy, please) :-)

This story is SO exciting. You just never know what's going to happen next and there's so many layers to it. I love that you tell it froms all their points of view. Oh and the way you made "Jemma" and "Sabrina" twins really made me laugh.
Your last chater was great. I loved your description and vision of what it as like for Lily to be in a coma. You have a wonderful imagination and I can really tell what you're seeing in your head when you write.

I have one question, though: where the heck James???

PAMS!

PS - your comuter situation at home is awful. I think I should post you a laptop to a secret location so you can type whenever you want.

07-14-2008, 11:56 AM	#185 (permalink)
Krysta Jarvey Join Date: May 2008 Location: Leicester, UK Posts: 567 Hogwarts RPG Name: Krysta Hedwig Sixth Year	Hello! Well I'm all caught up. I read it this morning, because I'm sick and didn't go into work. (lots of sympathy, please) :-) This story is SO exciting. You just never know what's going to happen next and there's so many layers to it. I love that you tell it froms all their points of view. Oh and the way you made "Jemma" and "Sabrina" twins really made me laugh. Your last chater was great. I loved your description and vision of what it as like for Lily to be in a coma. You have a wonderful imagination and I can really tell what you're seeing in your head when you write. I have one question, though: where the heck James??? PAMS! PS - your comuter situation at home is awful. I think I should post you a laptop to a secret location so you can type whenever you want. __________________