Eep! I have
stalkers fans!
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Originally Posted by
HPobsession33
awww this is soo sad!
poor Snape! thats all he wnated to think about was Lily!!
LOVED THIS!! It is really good!!
~Becca~
p.s- FIRST POST!!! 
Thank you Becca.
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Originally Posted by
PhoenixRising
Great story Zoe!!
And I love this part:
"Her eyes met his and it seemed that everything inside of him had melted away. He never would have referred to them as “emerald” – that was the chosen word of certain other people – rather they were like the green of Slytherin house, the color of the serpent. As though hypnotized by a great snake, he stared into her eyes, unable to look away."

Don't you? *giggles*
*pokes Jess* I knew you’d like that part seeming it fits with another couple that we all just
adore.
*coughTancandMiacough*
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Originally Posted by
Emiko
This is one awesome one-shot fan fiction Zoe. You should've called me up or told Liz to let slip that you wrote a little something on Snape!
Anywho, this is really great love. I really hope you do get to writting some more fan fiction really soon becasue you're super good at it.
Emiko!

When I told you to get back on SS, I didn't mean stalk me!
Thanks, but you're seriously a better writer than I am.
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Originally Posted by
Crush!Crush!Crush!
I'm not sure how to keep this short.
WOW!
I think that sums it up...
heehee. Thanks. I think I'd sum it up and just that word too.
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Originally Posted by
MUSTANG SALLY
Mah Creator!!!
That was Awesome!!!!
I love how you wrote about Lily's eyes!

That was great how he wanted to look into Harry's eyes to see Lily's

Very goooood idea!
That was really beautiful Zoe!
Loved it!

Clooooooooone!
Well, why else would Snape want to look at Harry? Not that Harry's ugly or anything, but Snape never liked him much anyway.
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Originally Posted by
nymphadora_nat
SO sad...
so touching..
poor sev...
You've got a very nice and wonderful fan fiction..
great job.....
Thank you!
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Originally Posted by
Evangeline Hermione
OMG!!!! that was soo sad
poor Snape, i never knew he felt like that.
oh i think im going to cry
great post it was awsome
Evangeline
xxxxx
Thank you Evangeline! *pets you* Don't cry, 'cause then I'll cry.
Thank you guys for commenting on my one-shot! It means a lot to me. I just might make a few more one-shots to celebrate whenever I get the chance to sit down and write.