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Old 06-28-2008, 06:27 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Hogwarts RPG Name:
Beauden Wild
Gryffindor
Seventh Year

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Gillyweed Beery
Slytherin
Fifth Year

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Ousmane Diomandé
Hufflepuff
Fourth Year

Hogwarts RPG Name:
Rajan Patil
Ravenclaw
First Year

Ministry Department Head:
Franklin Paton
Law Enforcement

Ministry Department Head:
Almer Toots
Transportation

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Originally Posted by HPobsession33 View Post
awww this is soo sad!
poor Snape! thats all he wnated to think about was Lily!!
LOVED THIS!! It is really good!!
~Becca~
p.s- FIRST POST!!!
Thank you Becca.

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Originally Posted by PhoenixRising View Post
Great story Zoe!!


And I love this part:
"Her eyes met his and it seemed that everything inside of him had melted away. He never would have referred to them as “emerald” – that was the chosen word of certain other people – rather they were like the green of Slytherin house, the color of the serpent. As though hypnotized by a great snake, he stared into her eyes, unable to look away."

Don't you? *giggles*
*pokes Jess* I knew you’d like that part seeming it fits with another couple that we all just adore.

*coughTancandMiacough*


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Originally Posted by Emiko View Post
This is one awesome one-shot fan fiction Zoe. You should've called me up or told Liz to let slip that you wrote a little something on Snape!

Anywho, this is really great love. I really hope you do get to writting some more fan fiction really soon becasue you're super good at it.
Emiko! When I told you to get back on SS, I didn't mean stalk me!

Thanks, but you're seriously a better writer than I am.

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Originally Posted by Crush!Crush!Crush! View Post
I'm not sure how to keep this short.
WOW!
I think that sums it up...
heehee. Thanks. I think I'd sum it up and just that word too.

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Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY View Post
Mah Creator!!!

That was Awesome!!!!

I love how you wrote about Lily's eyes! That was great how he wanted to look into Harry's eyes to see Lily's Very goooood idea!

That was really beautiful Zoe!
Loved it!
Clooooooooone!

Well, why else would Snape want to look at Harry? Not that Harry's ugly or anything, but Snape never liked him much anyway.

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Originally Posted by nymphadora_nat View Post
SO sad...
so touching..

poor sev...

You've got a very nice and wonderful fan fiction..

great job.....
Thank you!

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Originally Posted by Evangeline Hermione View Post
OMG!!!! that was soo sad
poor Snape, i never knew he felt like that.
oh i think im going to cry


great post it was awsome

Evangeline
xxxxx
Thank you Evangeline! *pets you* Don't cry, 'cause then I'll cry.

Thank you guys for commenting on my one-shot! It means a lot to me. I just might make a few more one-shots to celebrate whenever I get the chance to sit down and write.
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