Great story Zoe!!
And I love this part:
"Her eyes met his and it seemed that everything inside of him had melted away. He never would have referred to them as “emerald” – that was the chosen word of certain other people – rather they were like the green of Slytherin house, the color of the serpent. As though hypnotized by a great snake, he stared into her eyes, unable to look away."

Don't you? *giggles*