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Old 06-08-2004, 07:56 PM   #110 (permalink)
HarryPotterfreak82
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I'm guessing you like writing in a free style stanzas I love sonnets it says to post yours too so I thought I'd show you own of my fav ones (it's bein published yaya)

Horror happened very quick
Didn’t give me any time
No justice, the good get sick
Like it thought I wouldn’t mind

Now everything is fading to black
The worried voices begin to drown
And it seems they ill never come back
Yet your painful cry is still so loud

And you yell at me to stay
But there’s nothing left for me
You say wait another day
I only want to be free

You take my hand as I slip into forever
Your tear, it falls while I leave to return never
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