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Old 06-04-2004, 10:18 PM   #46 (permalink)
Dracnyzz
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Cliche, Meandering? Well, I suppose perhaps sometimes, but the last one was really good! It may have been a used idea, but you gave a nice perspective of it- one question- how could an 8 year old paint wrinkled hands? It would be really hard, Lol.

You have some work here that shows great talent- keep it up! =)
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