Hi! I'm a new reader ^^
I will be honest, and say that a few of your poems are just alright...nothing more but not bad either. But some of them are really touching and show more mature writing, such as "Lightning" (Lol your sp was off by just a lil) as well as "Eyes of the Storm". I think that is because that they carry deeper meanings that aren't just a spur of the moment thing, but something all readers can connect with. It's something that I try to work into my poetry as well =) keep writing poems!! I'll be back to read more :flowersmile:
and if you'd like and have some time, my poems are located under the topic "Muses." |