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Originally posted by angelwings@May 21 2004, 02:05 AM
Yay! Thanks, Nikki! Here's another one since I'm in a good mood today. It's not one of my best though but I think most can relate to this.
The Person In the Mirror
I am a great pretender
Who plays many parts
I fool other people
I'm a liar at heart
You say I'm intelligent
Unafraid to do wrong
Faced with many obstacles
Yet still remain strong
You say you envy me
That I'm a lucky one
You thought I was happy
Cause I had lots of fun
But look at the mirror
Tell me what do you see
I know you see yourself
But do you see the real me?
I'm not that intelligent
I just try to get by
I am afraid of failure
But your expectations are too high
I'm just a little child
Also weak inside
Whenever there's danger
I always want to hide
So don't look at me
As if I'm a dream
I'm not a great treasure
Not a diamond that gleams
So don't trust that mirror
It shows not who I am
You see it shows nothing
If only you knew me then
The mirror is a shadow
You see who you appear to be
But you could never see what's inside
The way I couldn't, the real me.
:unsure: Well?
WOW!!! I love this one! All your new ones are GREAT, as are your old!
I'm not saying I can relate to it, 'cause I've noticed I don't really relate to anything,
... But, sincerely, your writing is really unique! I'll tell you this now, your poems..., I know that when I read them, I won't be disappointed. Your the person that I can count on to make me feel happy, I guess I could say, through your words. And, you make them rymhe, (can't spell that, oops). I know that everytime I'm going to read them, I'm going to be happy, and not once be like... "What the hell was that?!" ...be hanging in the air.... lol Anyways, what I mean, for sure is...
PAMS