Thread: Tara's Poetry
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Old 05-26-2004, 02:36 AM   #26 (permalink)
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Hey Tara
I loved this one:
(I forgot to quote you!)
Why does everything have to be so difficult?
Why do I feel trapped in a vault?
Why don't you talk to me anymore?
Why do you just look at me and close the door?
What did I do to make you be this way?
Was it something I did or didn't say?
I used to talk to you all the time
But I told you how I felt, is that a crime?
Maybe we're better off being friends
I don't want things between us to end
Could you just say something so I know things are alright?
I don't want to feel like we're in a fight
Sometime soon I'm going to talk to you
So that our relationship will not be through

You are very talented! The first one got me hooked though. I love them. Poetry is a good way to express yourself. Your poems are interesting. Keep it up!
-Christine-
also- read my poems- Christine's Crazy Poems- I am such an odd one!
haha.
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