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S.Black · 05-25-2004, 05:16 AM

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everyone. I'm posting my poems to get some comments from people I don't know (that means you). I'm getting tired of hearing the same thing from family and my friends. So please be honest, but don't be to hurtful.

. Thanks. Some are titled other are not. So if you have a title for the ones that don't. Don't be shy to share. Here's the first.

I hate you
You lied to me
Promises you couldn't keep
I'm coming back
These words you said to me
We'll be together
Are the words you whisperep
Months have past
And still your there
You broke your word
And my heart

I hate you
You talk sweet thoughts
But throw deadly daggers
Right at my soul
My tears roll
Without warning
You say I love you
How when you cause
These tears and pian
Your words are hallow

I hate you
You say one thing
But do another
My wounds heal
Then you come back
With your candy tasting talk
Then you leave agian
With no good-bye
Leaving stab wounds through out my heart
Why?O why?

I hate you
Not being able to be mad
At you or myself
Like I look for it
Your a drug I need to kick
But like a fool
I'm still addict

I hate you
I hate this hold you have
On me, my heart and my soul

05-25-2004, 05:16 AM	#1 (permalink)
S.Black Horklump Join Date: May 2004 Location: Florida, but my heart is in NY Posts: 38	:dance_banana: everyone. I'm posting my poems to get some comments from people I don't know (that means you). I'm getting tired of hearing the same thing from family and my friends. So please be honest, but don't be to hurtful. . Thanks. Some are titled other are not. So if you have a title for the ones that don't. Don't be shy to share. Here's the first. I hate you You lied to me Promises you couldn't keep I'm coming back These words you said to me We'll be together Are the words you whisperep Months have past And still your there You broke your word And my heart I hate you You talk sweet thoughts But throw deadly daggers Right at my soul My tears roll Without warning You say I love you How when you cause These tears and pian Your words are hallow I hate you You say one thing But do another My wounds heal Then you come back With your candy tasting talk Then you leave agian With no good-bye Leaving stab wounds through out my heart Why?O why? I hate you Not being able to be mad At you or myself Like I look for it Your a drug I need to kick But like a fool I'm still addict I hate you I hate this hold you have On me, my heart and my soul