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Where a frustrated Hermione had just been standing now stood a magnificent Hawk in the exact shade of Hermione’s hair. She opened her wings wide and leapt into the air for a moment before crashing down.
I love this, its great that she wasnt the first one to learn how to do it, but i love what she changed into.
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Neville had become a cat as well, but unlike Harry he could not change his colors, he was almost the same color as Harry had been when he had been a Russian Blue. He was very large, had over large ears, and was mostly paw, leg and tail, slightly clumsy when he moved. He caught sight of a fly however, and leapt to unbelievable height with precision, speed and grace that surprised everyone including himself.
That is so like Neville, i love the description of it, and i love how you describe how he caught the fly
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Luna succeeded soon after Neville and everyone exclaimed over the beautiful markings on the elegant body of the Doe standing in front of them. Her belt was snowy white with large fawn colored spots. Her big brown eyes were full of kindness and joy as she bounded around the small room.
This suits Luna perfectly
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“You are beautiful.” exclaimed Neville, his voice soft and full of awe as she changed back.
Neville and Luna sitting in a tree, K.I.S.S.I.N.G (hehe), thats so cute, he loves her
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A small but powerful mountain lioness suddenly bust into the crowd, her roar powerful enough to shake the house on its foundations and elicit several screams. Neville still smiling at Luna fainted dead away
I knew this was Ginny before i even got to the name (but you already know that)
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The air around him seemed to change and suddenly he jumped up a strange look on his face. He opened his mouth to say something, but all that came out was a shrill bark, and where Ron had been standing a moment before was an extremely excited golden haired Cairn Terrier.
Thats so cute, i love dogs
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With that said Draco turned into the sleek white ferret that Harry had remembered from all those years ago.
His jaw hit the floor as Draco changed back. “Because he had humiliated me I was afraid and embarrassed to show any of you, I was afraid they would all laugh at me again.” Draco hung his head, and for a split second Harry thought he saw tears.
Normally i'd
Draco, but i feel sorry for him so
Cant wait till you post again, and to see everyones reaction to what happens