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04-26-2004, 05:16 PM

Your poem is painfully good. You can tell that your poem is sincere also because you repeated some of the words like

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play that guitar

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pretend to read as you pretend not to care

This is a sad poem and the ending is beautiful

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but the words never come

I hope I'll see more of your works!

04-26-2004, 05:16 PM	#2 (permalink)
Snowface Guest Posts: n/a	Your poem is painfully good. You can tell that your poem is sincere also because you repeated some of the words like Quote: play that guitar Quote: pretend to read as you pretend not to care This is a sad poem and the ending is beautiful Quote: but the words never come I hope I'll see more of your works!