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Linda Hagrid 
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Chapter 3, Part 1 So I can remember where I last read.
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Originally Posted by The Lari
Arora was asleep in the girls’ dorm, her head resting lightly on her pillow and her hair flowing over the pillow. The sheets were heavy on her skin, keeping it warm on a cold night.
I loved that description Lari. Very nice, gets you right in the scene. I love her hair being on her sheets that way ... *Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee* LOL but yeah, very nice intro. Quote:
Originally Posted by The Lari
A tapping could be heard as the night’s breeze fluttered over her face through the window that was slightly ajar. Wait, how could the breeze come in? She had made sure the drapes were firmly shut last night! There wasn’t a gap in it and it wasn’t going to roll out, she was sure of it. Then everything changed.
Okay, that was cool too, and honestly I liked the whole post, I wish I could say more but ... it's late and I don't know if I'll have time. I am reading your story because you r0x0rs Lari, and I think I'm going to try to catch up so ... I hope you don't mind if I don't give you Loooooooooooooooooooong posts like before I will when I catch up completely I promise.
You r0x0rs Lari ... but who's teh ... OMG! 