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Old 04-25-2004, 03:22 AM   #8 (permalink)
Dawn Bloom
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Thank-you Tessa , that's huge compliment coming from you, The Maker of Fan Works.

I wote this one like two months ago...


Forever Lost in (False) Paradise
I am so scared of what I will find
I dare not open my eyes
My ears hear nothing, but the sounds of water, or waterfalls

Deep in thought of what I am doing in this queer place
They say it is but folly, "There is no such surroundings!"
What would their words be now, if I spoke of my news

I feel no one close by, save me and my secret cry
to help me, come save me
From what they call, This False Paradise



BTW, Save means *Except*
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