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Old 07-20-2007, 12:34 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Hmmm. As hard as it was for me to click on this linky...I couldn't resist in the end. XD

The first chapter's main idea was completely in the same limelight as mine...But, I don't know. I can't help but think that as loyal as Smape claimed to be toward DD and while deep down in his heart, he wasn't evil---His logic and inner thoughts would still portray the dark past that he couldn't evade. He seemed too---Good? I dunno. I mean, I know he most likely will end up helping the Order in the last book---But, I don't think he'll seem this sincere? Blegh, I don't know what I'm on about. XD I mean, I never have been a HUGE fan of his...But, I never did deny that he's one heck of a character in the books.

The second chapter was beyond incredible. I always wondered how that conversation had played out and it seems that the writer has simply taken the words right from my own thoughts. Dumbledore is truly cannon and as for Smape, I guess I'm starting to see him in the light that this FF is geared towards and not as a SB obsessor. XD

Chapter Three: Hmmm, once again...Too good for my liking. XD I dunno why. But Smape can still be praised by showing a bit of evil likeness? Not actions. Just random thoughts. He seems so pure. And the reference about how DD was his friend...It completely caught me off guard. Malfoy was added in perfectly! The writing itself was awesome and I could honestly see myself trying to think of Smape as a completely different person but yeah... XD Either way, this FF has defo got me hooked...*reads on*

Chapter Four: I wubbbbbed that ending. Although, I don't know how McG is going to be able to keep as a secret...Either way, it's added on to the cliffy feeling and I can't wait to read more! ;]
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