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Hogwarts RPG Name: Annabelle Lee Costas First Year | ツ Zonko's Fanatic Forever! | Sirius Stalker | ShruckleNooferian ツ I cannot resist single-quote replying to my favorite parts in this FF...It seems as though I've honestly read through each of them a gazillion times and I have still yet---let myself enjoy them as a third-party.
So...Let the madness begin. *xD* Quote:
Sirius had been sitting at home, staring at the tapestry holding his entire family tree when Snape appeared in the fireplace. He had, regretfully, told Sirius to alert the rest of the Order members and tell them to go to the Ministry.
You know...I like the fact that whoever wrote this *cough* did manage to involve the tapestry. It seemed as though, in the book and likewise in the movie, Sirius claimed to despise that room and yet---I don't think he meant it. That room did in fact mean alot to him. As horrible as his family was to him, he still somewhat clung to his past and I don't think he ever hated them for their actions. XD *has rambled on far too long* I must warn whoever might read, with Sirius as the main topic, I tend to do that. Alot. *headdesk* Moving on... Quote:
Many people say that they can see their life flash before their eyes. This wasn’t the case for Sirius. Just before it hit him, Sirius looked over at Harry and saw his eyes widen. He felt himself fall backwards, then, all went black.
I loveeeee how this was written. I don't know why, exactly. Maybe it was just because of how sucky the movie version was in comparison to the book version of this scene...Either way, great transition. Quote:
He pushed and hit the air, trying to get through. Fully confused and tired, Sirius continued to look out at the scene in front of him. Harry continued to cry. He then noticed Bellatrix, who had begun to run off. Sirius became furious and groped around for his wand.
Truly cannon. Although, I might've added more about Bella right here. Not so much her physical attributes, just the renowned amount of anger Sirius now felt towards her. Although, I guess Sirius would in fact care more about how Harry was taking all of this in.
Hmm, I wubb the fact that you used the word groped. [LOL] And this is so not randomness on my part. It toterly reminds me of Stacey and her fairy tale in the Chat about the rope. Quote:
“This is Dumbledore’s doings,” he muttered to himself in anger as he lifted his head. “I’ll show him! I’ll get out of this place and help-" His voice trailed off as he stared at the empty room. The only thing that could be seen were a few shattered glasses and books knocked out of bookshelves.
Dumbledore... *tear* Yet again, Siry's dialogue is truly cannon. Hmm, but this means---Siry can still see what's happening in the Death Chamber? Oooh, that's what Aria was refering to! Or wait, maybe it's behind the veil? That doesn't seem to fit. *shuts up and reads on* Quote:
“What is this place?” he asked himself, narrowing his eyes as he searched around the mist. He paused for a moment as a confused look entered his face. “I guess if I start answering myself, I’m in big trouble, eh?” He raised and eyebrow and shook his head realizing it was beginning. He was answering his own questions but only in a silent way of thinking.
I LOVE this paragraph! *giggles* Insane or not, Siry is freakin uhmazing. Quote:
Gaining closer grounds to the shimmering radiance, he took a deep breath and closed his eyes for just a moment. He needed time to collect a few thoughts before entering into something he knew absolutely nothing about, but before he was completely finished …
That reminds me of Lupin. Hehe, I always considered the Marauders to more alike the other than people always assumed. Each just prized more of a select attribute. And, Sirius just so happened to be more spontaneous than realistic. Quote:
“I’ll get him myself,” a short squatty boy squawked with his wand in hand as if he were fighting with swords.
LOL. Once again, awesome choice of words. ;] *squawks in approval before keeeeeling that son of a gun once and for all* XD Quote:
“Watch where you point that thing, Wormtail,” Remus demanded. “Oh, and you two…” He stopped walking for a moment and turned his back towards Sirius and James. “Do you really think my bum is too small?” He began to shake his backside back and forth a couple of times.
Awwwwww! *love-sick* You know...If JKR doesn't agree to writing a Marauder's Time FF when I visit England and stalkconvince her to, I think I just might end up stalking the person who wrote this Chappie and force them to. [[Total joke. *ish so NOT evil*]] Quote:
Sirius stopped dead in his tracks before climbing out the window. He turned slowly towards Regulus, his eyes swimming with hate. “What did you say?”
“You heard me! Do I have to say it again? Filthy Mudblood lov-“
POW!
Sirius’ fist landed in the middle of Regulus’ face causing his nose to bleed. “MUMMY!!” Regulus screamed aloud and his hands flew up to his face and held his nose. He quickly ran out of the room, leaving Sirius alone to do as he pleased.
Hmmm, I find this part a little TOO disturbing. XD And, I know it was meant to be...but... Regulus is an oh-so mysterious charrie and I don't know...I guess we all assume he was envious of Siry at Hogwarts---And, so maybe he'd take out his anger on him at home because of how he shared his parents likeness for the purebloods...But, I never imagined that he'd completely fit into the Slytherin stereotype. *cough*Hisuseofwords*cough* Hmm, either way, Siry's description and dialogue once again was---> phenomenal. Quote:
“Me? Godfather?” Sirius had never known a true love until this very moment. A Godfather to a baby was more than words could ask for and at this point, Sirius could only nod ‘yes’ to the question asked from his loving friends.
Everyone knows that I wubb cheese. All sorts. But, I gotta hand it to the writer; No mush stands a chance next to this! It was extremely touching! Mhhhmmm! *nods and re-reads again* Quote:
Time was nonexistent in this world. Sirius walked for what felt like days on end, but he never knew exactly how long.
Time to uncover the secrets...*clings to Siry and whistles* Quote:
Does that darkness look familiar? I think I’ve already passed that patch of bleak, never ending darkness before… I must be going in circles…”
The empty void Sirius seemed to be stuck in always managed to suck up his voice. His voice never echoed no matter how loud he spoke and it always sounded so dulcet and muffled. He was bored and his voice was only making his boredom worse.
HAHA. I don't know why I'm finding this hilarious. *headdesk* But, like I mentioned earlier, whether Siry starts talking to himself as if he's off his rocker or not, it's only because he's awesomely schweet like that. *flips the collar of his robes* [LOL XD] But, on a serious note...This writer has definite talent. Quote:
There was nothing. Nothing at all, but he could hear… a song? What was it? It was beautiful and bright; its sound was so heavenly, but where was it coming from? Perhaps the darkness was a soprano. Getting to his feet, Sirius began searching for the source, unsure of exactly what he was looking for?
The early signs let on...If I hadn't already read this, I would surely think this plain was making mah Siry go crazy...Or else, he had finally reached the point in this plain in order to 'move on'. In fact, that's exactly what I thought was happening the first time I read it...*almost wanted to stop reading* Yet, I didn't. Therefore, the mystery was defo a GREAT thing to use. It got me sucked in and I continued on... Quote:
The song was once again within him, filling him with that pleasurable happiness and energy. He just wanted to go back to the tree, but he couldn’t move. Then a voice reached his ears, so inhuman and beautiful it made him want to cry.
“Who dares touch the Tree of Life?” the voice asked. Sirius tried to look to see who was speaking, but he could not see.
This reminded me of the devil. XD Or in better words, evil spirits. It kinda threw me off. I kept trying to get my mind from thinking of the Tree of Life in Eden and tried to look at it in a good light but it was hard....Then again, the mystery was once more evident and it did rouse my determination to continue reading and uncover the secrets... Quote:
“An uprising against me, mankind sought to destroy me; they were fools. I cannot be killed. I exist throughout. Human form was only temporary. The mortals that sought to kill me were punished. Magic was ripped from their bodies—thus the non-magical folk, muggles I believe you call them, were born. I left my physical, worldly form and returned to the place of my birth; the Tree of Life, hidden here in the Plain of Passing, where no mortal could find it, was to be my home.
“All who pass through here are dying or dead; they do not stay here for more than a few seconds worldly time. It may seem longer to them, but time is irrelevant here. They move on and thus continue their journeys. You however, Sirius Black, are still here and this is a predicament. You are no divine entity; you will destroy the balance in the world of the living and the passing. You have already been here far too long…” And what a mystery to uncover! This was beyond anything I would've ever imagined any one person could put into words. It was one thing brainstorming on it but---to actually write and have it click the way it did? Truly amazing. *bows down and continues reading again* Quote:
“Sirius Black, you are now a warrior of the Dead Army of Peorth; you will lead them with ancient magicks; you will not need a wand or a weapon for you will use the magicks of old, those that run through the Earth and the Universe. But before you can wield such power, I must bind you.”
Hmmm, I wubbbb the sound of that. Has a nice ring to it no? Dead Army of Peorth...Death is such a fickle thing. XD *still thinks that Siry isn't so* A girl can dream can't she? Hmmm, yessirreee.
Although, I can't help but wonder whether it was just to bind him...I don't know. There seems to be more to that little detail than meets the eye. Quote:
Peorth gyfu, Imbolic, ken lagu is, Samhain, sigel tyr rad… Imbolic, eoh ing, Imbolic, ing eoh, birca, Lughnasadh, birca ing eoh, Samhain... Beltane, man wyn, Samhain, wyn man, Imbolic… Samhain, thorn ur, Samhain, haegl eolh eh, Samhain…”
Sirius did not need to speak this odd language to know what was being spoken. He could feel what those strange words meant as the magicks being invoked by Peorth coursed through his being. He felt alive again! And so strong! Magicks of old were weaving in and out of his soul, his heart, his body; his heart was beating rapidly against his ribcage, his breathing was labored, and oh, how good it felt!
Sheeshhh. Talk about staying in profile. XD Mysterious, indeed. Once again, talent is surely evident in each little bit that the writer added. I could almost feel [[[or at least imagine perfectly]]] what Siry must have felt in that. Top notch Kudos to the writer. Quote:
And Sirius blacked out as a power like nothing before surged through him.
What a pattern to use at all the ends of the chapters! XD Haha, blacking out really does suit him though. Mhmm, Smexy Black indeed. ;]
Can't wait for more! This was awesomely schweeeeeet. And, not just because I'm a crazy 'ol SB obsessor.
__________________ You make me smile like the sun
Fall out of bed, sing like a bird
Dizzy in my head, spin like a record
Crazy on a Sunday night..
You make me dance like a fool
Just the thought of you can drive me wild
Ohh, you make me smile. ツ .......... |