This is absolutely amazing! I love how you've played out the teetering of whether Sirius is actually dead or not. Is he? Or no? Yeah, and I have to admit that my eyes watered reading the part about James and Lily asking Sirius to be Harry's Godfather. That was heart-wrenching. I also loved what you've done with the veil, and what you're making of it. I defiantely can't wait to read more. You've got me hooked! |