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Old 04-17-2004, 11:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my first poem so I hope you guys like it!
This one is called More Than Friends?

I pass you by in the hall
You say "Hi" and that is all
We've been friends for some time
But something's changed in my mind
I think about the times together we spend
But now I see you as more than a friend
Do you feel the same way too?
'Cause I see you watching me with those eyes of blue
You must think of me that way
I can tell by what people say
But the only one who really knows is you
You can tell me 'cause I love you too
I know you're shy, but so am I
Let's be together, or at least just try
'Cause if it doesn't work out, you're still my friend
We'll always be by each other 'till the end

What do you guys think?
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