HOLISTIC ACTRESS {X O} EVERYTHING IS CONNECTED
You know Max I really like the "Resolve" in the end of the fic. I mean her feeling and knowing it was over and all the 'questions' you had during the whole story like "are they going to work out" finally got answered. And I also think its good that you weren't "swayed" by the haggles of fans to make your story contain a love-story between the two of them. I also think its really "real" seeming and really love that about the story.
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