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Come What May · 06-26-2007, 12:53 AM

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Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved

I can TOTALLY see Ron saying that!

So Draco was using her!
I had a feeling...
If not that... he's lying to live!

Even better...
But still, I personally bet that he was using her

Guess I'll find out later!

Great update! Can't wait for the next post to answer all my suspicions...
If only there was a smiley where it had a dude scratching his chin inquisitively! Until that day...
I can't wait for the next post to answer all my suspicions...

~Sarah

Well Sarah wait no longer...here is the next chapter!

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Originally Posted by The_Slytherin_Heir

Yeah that's Ron always thinking on the bright side anyway NOOOOOOO -hits Draco for being a .......--then runs away screaming as Bellatrix just stepped out of the dark hallway- -runs outta lala land and falls on gravel- GREAT POST PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS -runs to get bandaid-
Caity

RUN! Bellatrix is evil!

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Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY

That chapter blew me away. So many things happened! Ron got betrayed. Hermione got brutally bretrayed...Or did she?

That post was awsome!!!!!!!!! You need to post really quick! I want to know what happens next!!!

*Steph*

Here is the next post!

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Originally Posted by Fallen_Angel1721

The above is me my cuz was over as her house has no internet

Oh...okay!

Quote:

Originally Posted by jkrsong96

Oh, I was right about Victoria! I knew she had something to do with the evil plan!

Yes you were Twinnie!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Samia

I was right about Victoria.. And preety sure Draco will turn good..(I am not preety sure if I want that )

Great post Emma!!!

Thanks hun! And yes you were right!

Quote:

Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004

Awww how cute!!! I feel bad for Hermione and Ron though. PAMS

Everything will be okay...

Quote:

Originally Posted by Little Trooper

Those last two chapters were amazing. Such a twist to it all.

Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by shirelbb

OMG! I have nothing to say except, PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!
You have to write more, don't leave us hangin' like this!
I'm still here! Waiting for the next chappie!!!
Oh, by-the-way, did I mention how much I loooove your fanfic????
PAMS!
-*~ Shirel ~*-

P.S. Did I forget to tell you that you HAVE to write more today?!?

Here is the next chapter!

Okay...Next chapter!

Chapter 21:
Hours passed and all four friends were still tied up. Draco entered the room once and awhile but took no notice in any of them.

“Draco? When should we kill them?” Bellatrix asked as she watched Draco.

Draco shrugged.

“Draco don’t waste your time on that mudblood!”

“Shut up! Don’t call her that! And it is none of your business who I waste my time on!”

Bellatrix stood up and yelled, “You will respect me! I am…”

“The only reason you think I should respect you is because you had relationships with my father a long time ago! And just because you gave me a sister!” Draco yelled pointing at Victoria.

“I don’t like you very much either Draco” Victoria snapped.

“I would have preferred a dog! But you brought that home!” Draco continued yelling.

Draco walked out of the room and ran towards the room where Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny were. Bellatrix and Victoria ran after him. They were not going to let him ruin their plans.

Draco burst through the door and startled everyone. He walked up to Harry and Ginny and untied them. He did the same to Hermione and Ron.

“What are you doing?” Harry asked.

“Just shut up and leave. Bellatrix will surely be down here any minute”.

“But why are you helping us? We have been tied up for hours and you barely decide to help now!” Ron snapped.

Draco never got the chance to respond for at that moment Bellatrix and Victoria ran into the room.

“Draco! How dare you!” Bellatrix snapped as she hit Ginny with a spell. Ginny fell to the floor…unconscious.

Everyone took out there wands ready to fight. Bellatrix shouted another spell but this time towards Ron. Ron used a shield charm to block it.

Hermione clapped and yelled, “Go Ron!”

Ron bowed and smiled but was nearly hit with another spell this time from Victoria.

“Hey!” Ron snapped.

Victoria smiled and said, “Let’s see what the dumbest part of the Trio can do”.

Ron’s face turned red. But before he could do anything Hermione shouted, “Expelliarmus!” and Victoria was sent flying across the room.

“Thanks” mumbled Ron.

“I would have killed her but I’ll leave that up to you” Hermione smiled.

Ron started laughing and then there was a flash of green light. Hermione and Ron turned towards Harry, Draco, and Bellatrix. All three were on the ground.

I hope you all enjoyed!

Love,
Emma

06-26-2007, 12:53 AM	#474 (permalink)
Come What May Billywig Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: California, Palmdale Posts: 3,608 Hogwarts RPG Name: Jacqueline Marie Granger Sixth Year	Run, Emma, Run! Quote: Originally Posted by MalfoyzBeloved I can TOTALLY see Ron saying that! So Draco was using her! I had a feeling... If not that... he's lying to live! Even better... But still, I personally bet that he was using her Guess I'll find out later! Great update! Can't wait for the next post to answer all my suspicions... If only there was a smiley where it had a dude scratching his chin inquisitively! Until that day... I can't wait for the next post to answer all my suspicions... ~Sarah Well Sarah wait no longer...here is the next chapter! Quote: Originally Posted by The_Slytherin_Heir Yeah that's Ron always thinking on the bright side anyway NOOOOOOO -hits Draco for being a .......--then runs away screaming as Bellatrix just stepped out of the dark hallway- -runs outta lala land and falls on gravel- GREAT POST PAMSPAMSPAMSPAMS -runs to get bandaid- Caity RUN! Bellatrix is evil! Quote: Originally Posted by MUSTANG SALLY That chapter blew me away. So many things happened! Ron got betrayed. Hermione got brutally bretrayed...Or did she? That post was awsome!!!!!!!!! You need to post really quick! I want to know what happens next!!! Steph Here is the next post! Quote: Originally Posted by Fallen_Angel1721 The above is me my cuz was over as her house has no internet Oh...okay! Quote: Originally Posted by jkrsong96 Oh, I was right about Victoria! I knew she had something to do with the evil plan! Yes you were Twinnie! Quote: Originally Posted by Samia I was right about Victoria.. And preety sure Draco will turn good..(I am not preety sure if I want that ) Great post Emma!!! Thanks hun! And yes you were right! Quote: Originally Posted by HP1FAN2004 Awww how cute!!! I feel bad for Hermione and Ron though. PAMS Everything will be okay... Quote: Originally Posted by Little Trooper Those last two chapters were amazing. Such a twist to it all. Thanks! Quote: Originally Posted by shirelbb OMG! I have nothing to say except, PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! PAMS! You have to write more, don't leave us hangin' like this! I'm still here! Waiting for the next chappie!!! Oh, by-the-way, did I mention how much I loooove your fanfic???? PAMS! -~ Shirel ~- P.S. Did I forget to tell you that you HAVE to write more today?!? Here is the next chapter! Okay...Next chapter! Chapter 21: Hours passed and all four friends were still tied up. Draco entered the room once and awhile but took no notice in any of them. “Draco? When should we kill them?” Bellatrix asked as she watched Draco. Draco shrugged. “Draco don’t waste your time on that mudblood!” “Shut up! Don’t call her that! And it is none of your business who I waste my time on!” Bellatrix stood up and yelled, “You will respect me! I am…” “The only reason you think I should respect you is because you had relationships with my father a long time ago! And just because you gave me a sister!” Draco yelled pointing at Victoria. “I don’t like you very much either Draco” Victoria snapped. “I would have preferred a dog! But you brought that home!” Draco continued yelling. Draco walked out of the room and ran towards the room where Harry, Hermione, Ron, and Ginny were. Bellatrix and Victoria ran after him. They were not going to let him ruin their plans. Draco burst through the door and startled everyone. He walked up to Harry and Ginny and untied them. He did the same to Hermione and Ron. “What are you doing?” Harry asked. “Just shut up and leave. Bellatrix will surely be down here any minute”. “But why are you helping us? We have been tied up for hours and you barely decide to help now!” Ron snapped. Draco never got the chance to respond for at that moment Bellatrix and Victoria ran into the room. “Draco! How dare you!” Bellatrix snapped as she hit Ginny with a spell. Ginny fell to the floor…unconscious. Everyone took out there wands ready to fight. Bellatrix shouted another spell but this time towards Ron. Ron used a shield charm to block it. Hermione clapped and yelled, “Go Ron!” Ron bowed and smiled but was nearly hit with another spell this time from Victoria. “Hey!” Ron snapped. Victoria smiled and said, “Let’s see what the dumbest part of the Trio can do”. Ron’s face turned red. But before he could do anything Hermione shouted, “Expelliarmus!” and Victoria was sent flying across the room. “Thanks” mumbled Ron. “I would have killed her but I’ll leave that up to you” Hermione smiled. Ron started laughing and then there was a flash of green light. Hermione and Ron turned towards Harry, Draco, and Bellatrix. All three were on the ground. I hope you all enjoyed! Love, Emma __________________ A very big thank you to Cassirin at Anna and Ern's Box of Every Flavor Beans for this wonderful siggy!