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^^What do you want me to clear up about James?
Maybe I should have kept him out of the story...
Well... he kinda just jumped in there outta nowhere with no prior mention or anything (as far as I could tell), which is a pretty hard thing for readers (as I noticed at least). It's always nice to have some sort of lead-up or more info on him... if you want it a surprise have more info on him then, that's all...
But I have a few questions but they're kinda hard to ask so I'll just ask ones I can phrase...
Like firstly, is he the same guy from your one-shot or someone totally different with just the same name? (this one vexes me the most)
And who is he exactly/how does he know Hermione?
That's all I can really think of a.t.m...