Wow, that was such a great one-shot! Especially for writing a new style, that is so hard, congrats. I happen to love that song by Hinder, you made the song and the fan fic perfect for each other! I also wish I could say pams to this. You mentioned other one-shots that you've written but have you written any continous fan fics? If you haven't I'd read any that you might write in the future. Again, well done!