I do that here and there. Kinda like God giving his side of things. lol The first one I did it too:
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“I'm afraid there's nothing more we can do,” he said. Indeed, they didn't think she'd heard. In that case, she wasn't letting them know. “We've tried everything, and there's just no improvement.” She could imagine those words written across her file: failure to thrive. “We're moving you up to the fourth floor so you can have some time to recover. If you show some improvement, we'll let you go home until your next episode.”
It was just a little more seemless. I know there's a word for switching back and forth in a meaningful way, but I forget what it's called.
Oh, and for your other question:
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I heard soft footsteps and someone sat on the couch by me.
“You're dying here?”
“Yeah, I am.”
Was actually meant to be him.