 Nabs!Ama | | The Happy Hufflepuff
Slightly eerie post. And I'd give you another detailed analysis, lol, but I'm too tired. Anyway, I just have one issue: the second and third paragraph are in third person narrative, whereas everything else is in first person. It kinda threw me off for a while, lol.
Anyway, I like it. I keep thinking "Turn 11 already!!!" while I'm reading.
Sooo...the William Moore died? |