| Nogtail
Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Middle of nowhere
Posts: 4,526
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First Year  x3
|  JayMay ♥ Big, yellow duckie <3
OMG! Max has yet another FF. YAYNESS! Didn't take me that long to find it, did it? 
Reading KasTan has really made me believe what an amazing writer you are. As Emma said on the first page, you're fashioned a whole new setting, a new magical school, new characters, everything. And the story is really different, too. It's simply beautiful. 
I wish I could comment on every post, but I'll just quote some of mah fave bit-seeez from the last two updates right now.
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Originally Posted by Maxi the oh so0o0o0o awesome  The whole place was empty, with only one person around, walking leisurely down the corridor. And no, no prizes on guessing who it was – Tanzeel. Teee heeee heeee. This bit made me laugh. 
Quote: Gosh, couldn't you have given an even lamer response, Kashan Aleen? a voice snapped at her from within.
Haha, someone's being too conscious about what she says.
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Tanzeel arched an eyebrow upwards. For a moment, he really looked as if he was going to hit her.
Ohhh ohhh.
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Then, all of a sudden, he calmed down. Smiling, he asked sweetly, “I’m Tanzeel. And what would your name be?”
What??? Surprising. Something's fishy here.
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Tanzeel smiled again, his brown eyes never leaving her face. “Well, Kash, are you sure you don’t want me to hex you?” he asked her, still just as sweetly. That was when Kashan realized what he was playing at.
Lolz. This whole para made me laugh; it's amazing. I love it. *writes it down*  *pets* You're brilliant at this, Max.
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She opened her mouth to retort, but –
But what indeed????
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Tanzeel had already left.
Wow, he sure has a lotttttttt of attitude. No wonder Kashan's fallen for him. From what I get from the story, she's used to being paid attention to and he's not paying her any, hehehehehe. *pokes* Lol.
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“You what?” she asked once more.
“I love Tanzeel,” Kasha repeated in a so-what manner.
Love these two lines! *writes these down too*
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“– Lily Renald Asaif?”
“Yeah?”
“Shut up.”
I SO heart this bit! It was amazing. Really brilliant work.
Loving the stowee. PAMS! PAMS! PAMS!  I'll be back. *shifty* YAYNESSNESSNESS!!!!!!!
Love,
~~Jay~~
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