I loved it! and i agree with many of the people here - I write poetry as a hobby and alot of it doesn't rhyme. I loved the point of view, it was original and not many others would think of it! I think it was wonderful!
And I have my own poem thread also, and I was wondering if you wanted to come see - it's in the second page, Tales of Hogwarts Hearts. I would like to know what you think of my writings.
Happy writing! ::waves::
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