Ooooooo I love it! It starts very strongly, the characters personalities are just like you described them above, and I honestly can't see what you're going to do with these characters Maxie! It is very different from ''Ecstacy'' but that's a good thing because it proves that you're a diverse writter, you can write other stuff besides romance, which is brilliant! And you've been able to come up with you're own characters, plot, setting,... just about EVERYTHING! Love your creativity! <3 You know, what I love the most about your writting style besides it being completly brilliant, is that you're very descriptive, so anyone who reads your stories can imagine everyting perfectly! I really did like it, and I hope you get loads of readers because you really are an amzing writter!   PAMS! PAMS!  -Emma <333 EDIT: First to post! 
Last edited by luv16; 03-18-2007 at 11:18 PM.
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