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Alyonna · 03-16-2004, 10:48 PM

its a little too repetitive for me and that last line (wait, im already dead) doesnt exactly work too well.... but otherwise, good work.

03-16-2004, 10:48 PM	#5 (permalink)
Alyonna Imp Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: At your neck! Posts: 489	its a little too repetitive for me and that last line (wait, im already dead) doesnt exactly work too well.... but otherwise, good work. __________________ What shall I call thee when thou art a man?