thanks so much Alyonna! your words are very kind ^^

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"Snow"

So exquisite, so lovely
...So white
Bringing cheer and laughter
A sunlit sight

Mirthful children glide down
The hill
Laughing even with the arrival of
The day's hours of darkness
For they know....
It’s not really
Ended
While
The flecks of frost blow away
Away... far away…

Can't it be seen?
Hidden away
In the sanctuary of ice
Where the white isn't so exquisite
And even the moon
Is pensive
Like any distant maiden
Yet not
.....So beautiful.

Though... no doubts there
For it only
Only
Echoes the world.
~~~~~

ack! this poem supposedly has different spacing and everything but it doesn't show up here =/