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Phora · 03-09-2004, 01:15 AM

your poetry is ok. just needs alittle work. try to not include you and i words in there so much, it will make your poetry more interesting.

03-09-2004, 01:15 AM	#3 (permalink)
Phora Bundimun Join Date: Mar 2004 Posts: 24	your poetry is ok. just needs alittle work. try to not include you and i words in there so much, it will make your poetry more interesting.