hey... i just wrote a few poems and were wondering what you guys thought... please tell me ur honest opinion it will be muchly appreciated! thanx

BEST FRIENDS

I knew everything about

Her

She knew everything about

Me

Like friends do

My best friend



We shared our thoughts

Our happiness

Our sadness

We knew everything about

Each other

Yet I did not know

Her

And she did not know

Me



I was a mystery

She was a mystery

And I never knew

That two people could be so close

Two people that didn't even know each other



But since i have met you

I have long learned

You don't need to know someone

You only need to know

That they will always be there for you


here is another one called DANCER


We feel the freedom

Of the music,

It makes my heart soar.

We practice containment,

My earthbound feet

Feel the ache.

I understand

The duality of dance—

Love the freedom

Respect the studied movement.





We move in unison,

As one,

Part of the music,

A piece of the whole,

Individual yet joined.

I feel and I practice,

The music plays—

We dance and dance again,

to become

Poetry in motion.



We leap into the air,

But not as high

As my heart soars.

With simple joy

With hard earned perfection

A paradox in motion—

Both independent

And dependent.

We dance the song away

And wait for tomorrow,

In hopes that we might

Dance another song away



wut do u gusy think???? thanx!