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MalfoyzBeloved · 11-29-2006, 03:37 PM

This is the sequel to Choices. Sorry about the wait, I was trying to make sure I could actually continue where I got stuck at.
Summary:
it’s been twelve years since Draco and Hermione’s deaths. Dezi has grown up with Harry as her father, Ginny as her mother, her brother, Darren, who is twelve and in his 2nd year, four years younger than she is, and her sister, Chloe, who was sixish years younger than she was and going into her first year.
Since Dezi has gone to Hogwarts, people have been after her because she’s a Malfoy in Gryffindor, and that she’s a ‘mudblood Malfoy’. They constantly remind her of the fact that she’s truly an orphan. After five years of this torture from the students, she falls into an even deeper state of misery (not depression just to make that clear, but she isn’t exactly happy...) in her 6th year, and despite her friend Kristal trying to help, it just doesn’t work.
But then a boy mysteriously shows up at Hogwarts, almost out of thin air, claiming to be a sixth year Gryffindor as well. He doesn’t care that Dezi is really a Malfoy, and he shows Dezi that it doesn’t matter who you because of where you come from, but who you really are and want to become. (There’s a secret about who the boy is BTW, you’ll probably figure out who he is before I reveal who he is and what happened to him). You know me, things will probably move fast =) (and like I've said, it'll go fast cause of my lack of ideas... dunno how long this F.F will be, but I'm sure this'll be the last F.F in line with Secret Love and Choices)

BTW, I DID make sure to incorporate Draco and Hermione You’ll find out in future chapters how I do so (YES, they ARE dead, I’d like to remind ya

).

And also, you all remember how Dezi’s eyes could change colour, right? Well she was a born Metamorphmagi, but the shock of her parents deaths affected her (as it did for Tonks when Sirius died, that sort of thing), and she hasn’t used her power since then, let alone it hasn’t even been working with her eyes changing with her emotions or anything... so ya

Just wanted to make that clear too, something'll happen with those abilities actually...

The first chapter is kinda short... but ya, it just leads up is all I can say...
Anyways, I'll stop rambling now

Enjoy the start to a new F.F

Sarah

Chapter 1
Fed Up

Dezi tossed her things inside an empty compartment. The wall of the compartment shook with the force her luggage was tossed at. Dezi didn’t care, she was mad, and once a Malfoy was mad, there’s no point in fighting it.

Sitting down in a seat, she put her face in her hands. She didn’t want to go back, she was practically pushed on the train by Ginny, and just last night Dezi had a fight, ‘yelling match’ as Darren had put it, with her ‘mom’ and ‘dad’ that they managed to get Mrs. Black involved.

“Nothing has gone right in my life... why me? Why the hell does it have to be me...?” Dezi thought aloud. Everything plummeted as soon as the Sorting Hat had yelled ‘Gryffindor’ when she was sorted. It truly plummeted when she was born, the moment her real mum went to a Malfoy of all people. If only they were alive, then she wouldn’t be thrown into this madness called her life.

“Didn’t want to come back, eh?”

Dezi looked up and saw her friend Kristal close the compartment door closed.

“What makes you say that?” Dezi asked sarcastically.

“It was hard not to notice your mum push you onto the train.”

“She’s not my mum,” Dezi spat as she turned away, putting her feet on the seat beside her and hugging her legs to her body.

“So sorry,” Kristal said with a similar sarcastic edge Dezi used moments before. “Your adoptive mother. Should I call your father your adoptive father as well?”

Dezi rolled her eyes.

“You had a fight again, didn’t you?”

“Yeah.”

“What about this time?”

“Coming here.”

“Why waste time fighting about something like that? It’s futile.”

Dezi glared at Kristal.

“What?”

Dezi shook her head and looked away again, back out the window to the passing land of the outskirts of London.

“God... I can’t do this anymore.”

“Do what?”

“This! Take the load from you, day in, day out! Six years, I’ve put up with it that long. Trying to help, it’s just a waste of time!”

“Kris...”

“No, I’ve had enough of it. If you’re lucky you’ll find someone else to annoy, and you made it bloody well clear you aren’t lucky.”
Kristal got up, grabbed her things and left, slamming the compartment door shut. Sighing, Dezi stayed where she was, oblivious to the fact she had just thrown away her only friend.

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11-29-2006, 03:37 PM	#1 (permalink)
MalfoyzBeloved Puffskein Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Canada Posts: 2,438	'Cause You're Watching Over Me - Sa13+ This is the sequel to Choices. Sorry about the wait, I was trying to make sure I could actually continue where I got stuck at. Summary: it’s been twelve years since Draco and Hermione’s deaths. Dezi has grown up with Harry as her father, Ginny as her mother, her brother, Darren, who is twelve and in his 2nd year, four years younger than she is, and her sister, Chloe, who was sixish years younger than she was and going into her first year. Since Dezi has gone to Hogwarts, people have been after her because she’s a Malfoy in Gryffindor, and that she’s a ‘mudblood Malfoy’. They constantly remind her of the fact that she’s truly an orphan. After five years of this torture from the students, she falls into an even deeper state of misery (not depression just to make that clear, but she isn’t exactly happy...) in her 6th year, and despite her friend Kristal trying to help, it just doesn’t work. But then a boy mysteriously shows up at Hogwarts, almost out of thin air, claiming to be a sixth year Gryffindor as well. He doesn’t care that Dezi is really a Malfoy, and he shows Dezi that it doesn’t matter who you because of where you come from, but who you really are and want to become. (There’s a secret about who the boy is BTW, you’ll probably figure out who he is before I reveal who he is and what happened to him). You know me, things will probably move fast =) (and like I've said, it'll go fast cause of my lack of ideas... dunno how long this F.F will be, but I'm sure this'll be the last F.F in line with Secret Love and Choices) BTW, I DID make sure to incorporate Draco and Hermione You’ll find out in future chapters how I do so (YES, they ARE dead, I’d like to remind ya ). And also, you all remember how Dezi’s eyes could change colour, right? Well she was a born Metamorphmagi, but the shock of her parents deaths affected her (as it did for Tonks when Sirius died, that sort of thing), and she hasn’t used her power since then, let alone it hasn’t even been working with her eyes changing with her emotions or anything... so ya Just wanted to make that clear too, something'll happen with those abilities actually... The first chapter is kinda short... but ya, it just leads up is all I can say... Anyways, I'll stop rambling now Enjoy the start to a new F.F Sarah Chapter 1 Fed Up Dezi tossed her things inside an empty compartment. The wall of the compartment shook with the force her luggage was tossed at. Dezi didn’t care, she was mad, and once a Malfoy was mad, there’s no point in fighting it. Sitting down in a seat, she put her face in her hands. She didn’t want to go back, she was practically pushed on the train by Ginny, and just last night Dezi had a fight, ‘yelling match’ as Darren had put it, with her ‘mom’ and ‘dad’ that they managed to get Mrs. Black involved. “Nothing has gone right in my life... why me? Why the hell does it have to be me...?” Dezi thought aloud. Everything plummeted as soon as the Sorting Hat had yelled ‘Gryffindor’ when she was sorted. It truly plummeted when she was born, the moment her real mum went to a Malfoy of all people. If only they were alive, then she wouldn’t be thrown into this madness called her life. “Didn’t want to come back, eh?” Dezi looked up and saw her friend Kristal close the compartment door closed. “What makes you say that?” Dezi asked sarcastically. “It was hard not to notice your mum push you onto the train.” “She’s not my mum,” Dezi spat as she turned away, putting her feet on the seat beside her and hugging her legs to her body. “So sorry,” Kristal said with a similar sarcastic edge Dezi used moments before. “Your adoptive mother. Should I call your father your adoptive father as well?” Dezi rolled her eyes. “You had a fight again, didn’t you?” “Yeah.” “What about this time?” “Coming here.” “Why waste time fighting about something like that? It’s futile.” Dezi glared at Kristal. “What?” Dezi shook her head and looked away again, back out the window to the passing land of the outskirts of London. “God... I can’t do this anymore.” “Do what?” “This! Take the load from you, day in, day out! Six years, I’ve put up with it that long. Trying to help, it’s just a waste of time!” “Kris...” “No, I’ve had enough of it. If you’re lucky you’ll find someone else to annoy, and you made it bloody well clear you aren’t lucky.” Kristal got up, grabbed her things and left, slamming the compartment door shut. Sighing, Dezi stayed where she was, oblivious to the fact she had just thrown away her only friend. Post #2 Post #3 Post #4 Post #5 Post #6 Post #7 Post #8 Post #9 Post #10 Post #11 Post #12 Post #13 Post #14 Post #15 Post #16 Post #17 Post #18 Post #19 Post #20 Post #21 Post #22 Post #23 Post #24 Post #25 __________________ *Siggy from Lissy and Anna's Shop of Super Frazzling Graphics* Last edited by demented_death_eater; 07-09-2011 at 02:47 AM.