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Old 02-23-2004, 04:29 AM   #80 (permalink)
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Y'all rock at writing poems. Heres one of mine, An ex-friend of mine said something about me while I was in the shadows and I heard. It inspired me, lol, i guess....

In The Shadows

Hiding in the shadows, slipping from the light
you hear the little things, others just not might,
want your prying ears, to hear along the way,
cant you hear them calling, crying all the day,
only you who bares, carries all alone,
the never ending stream, of comments to the bone,
your bone they want to break, your ears the want to fake,
covering the tales, they tell not to your face,
lying, lying, lying, lying all the same,
tell some other one, who fakes the killing pain,
dying from inside, burning from within,
cant you see the signs, Im falling once again.

So what do you think?
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