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Old 02-20-2004, 09:04 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Thankyou! What else do other's think then?

I have one more:


Only If

Love is pure, and gentle if,
Those things you say mean well,
But all those very simple gifts,
Mean nothing – Can’t you tell?
I want much more than gold and such,
But you don’t understand,
I feel as though love is too much,
And you don’t give a damn.

It was our love that brought us near,
But nothing is the same,
I feel as though I am in fear,
For this is just a game.



What do you all think of that one then?

-Felicia
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