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Originally Posted by Ali
Not crying fully, but he did shed a tear. It's like when you watch something like Lion King and see Mufasa fall. You shed a couple of tears, but don't go into a stream of tears.
Speak for yourself...
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Thanks for the reply Shannon. The whole idea of fear is respect sorta makes sense, and I thought that Voldie, of all people would believe that.
No problem. I've been reading when I can, and I never had time to post. But, I'm all caught up now...and it's very astute of you to make that connection...with the fear thing. Again, you're very good on character development.
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*plans to flee after the next few posts end.* I won't kill Ron, but he might not stay alive. *whoops, that's the same thing.* There's a lotta Ron fans here, I think I should run.
Ali, I love you, I do, but if you kill Ron, I'm going to have to cry...then hurt you. Nothing personal.
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Lol, It was great. I saw it from the bit when they landed on the astroid, missed all the slow stuff. But the guy died
I'll probably watch it again today for the fun of it.
Thank goodness someone else thinks it's sad! I watch that last part all the time and cry, and everyone always makes fun of me because they claim it was his job. But saying goodbye to his daughter and sacraficing himself and...and...*sobs* Now, you got me in the mood to watch Armageddon!
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Get him to kill Ron. *Looks at Shannon and Ottery, Flees*
*grabbing torches and pitchforks, smilling sweetly* What?
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So, something really weird happened last night. After watching Armageddon I had loads of ideas for this, and was writing from midnight till 2.30. And now, I'm sorta upset because I finished writing all the action stuff. All that's left is going to destroy the astroid. So, A post ist here, or will be in a minute.
Yay! Well, then I will be editing this post then...Does that mean it's over? :unsure: Sad.
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I dunno when I'll be writing next coz I've just got a new 24 Novel for my birthday
A man who puts Jack Baur before others...I knew I liked you! lol.
EDIT: The review...
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It had all started 16 years ago when a prophecy had been made. It stated that a child born would have the power to vanquish the dark lord. A few weeks later, two children were born. One of them had the power and was doomed since his birth. After a year of being alive, his parents were killed. With nowhere to turn, he was dumped at the house of his mother’s sister. As he grew, he wasn’t treated well, even though every wizarding household knew of his name. When he came of age, he realised the true cause of his parents death, the reason his life had been tampered with. He fought, trying to defeat the evilness which had given him so much pain. He had succeeded a few times, but Lord Voldemort would always get back up. This was the final stand, where only one would live.
I love that opening...a little history...a little drama...very nice.
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“Petrificus Totalus!” Ron shouted sending a body-bind curse at Voldemort. Voldemort moved to the side and the spell hit the corpse of Wormtail. The body flew to the side and a red beam of light narrowly avoided Ron.
Holy [
censored for the young ones] OMG!
!!!
RON! I swear, he's a total hero!
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Voldemort sent out three spells, never before seen by Harry. They had a violet beam and bounced off the shield, flying through the veil.
The ground began to shake, the benches began to move. Something was definitely wrong. The light in the room began to go out, until the only source of light was the spotlight situated directly above the damaged veil.
“Reducto!” Voldemort shouted, hoping to break the shield which was surrounding Harry and Ron. At first, he thought he had failed, but realised he was successful when both Harry and Ron flew backwards. The dark lord’s eyes widened as he raised his wand, believing this was it.
You're a master at this! omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!
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“Avada Kedavra!” He roared, sending a green beam of light at Ron.
“Ron!” Harry shouted, noticing what had happened. Thinking quick he looked at the bench on the floor between Ron and the incoming spell and said “Wingardium Leviosa.” The bench rose, and was smashed into pieces,
*stop breathing* RON!
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saving Ron’s life.
“Bloody hell, that was close,” Ron said, looking at the remains of the bench on the floor.
*silence*
*cry* You're killing me here, Ali!
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“Acting like you are the leader, all because of a stupid prophecy. I bet you didn’t know that this has something to do with an aunt of yours, Harry.”
Voldemort said, wiping his forehead with his bony arm.
Harry froze, almost petrified at what was said. What could Aunt Petunia have to do with any of this? She was a muggle who had nothing to do with magic. Or was she? She always seemed to know about the goings-on in the wizarding world. She even communicated with the late Hogwarts headmaster, Professor Albus Dumbledore.
And here's where you've completely won me over! Ali, seriously, you are a fantastic writer!
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Caught off guard, Ron raised his wand, took a deep breath and shouted “Expelliarmus.” As the spell flew through the air, it made a whistling sound and connected at the other end with Voldemort. He flew backwards, crashing into the now closed door. He lay for a moment, appearing unconscious, and then raised his hand up. A low murmur began, and noise could be heard from out of the room. Voldemort began to speak in a strange language, one which unlike parseltongue, had no hisses and focused on sounds like a cough. The light above the room began to flicker and things were getting cold.
Which means....? Too much suspense! Now I know why my readers hate cliffhangers! That was fantastic!
Okay, so I hope that you enjoy your 24 book and your movies, but don't forget about us completely, okay? This is so great, and you are so talented! PAMS soon!
Shannon
