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Originally Posted by loyal_seeker
Yes Your Story Really Is That Good! I Can't Survive Without It! Awesome Post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pams!!!
Wow! Thanks, I'll post later today.
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Originally Posted by padfoot_rox93
Yay! You're okay! Good, good, I was getting frantic.
Awww, poor James and Lily. I can't believe she might lose the baby. PAMS!!
Amie
I'm sorry we worried you; Nate made it sound like I was dying *punches Nate and yells, "Why would you do that?"* I'll post in a couple hours.
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Originally Posted by gisele
Hey Katie, you asked me to check out this fic awhile ago and here I am (I finally finished reading it all)
I hope you're ok after your peanut allergy; there was a very publicized story where I live about a girl who died because her boyfriend kissed her two hours after eating a peanut butter sandwhich.
I think I heard about that....... wasn't it in Boston? I live about two hours away from there. Anyway, yes, I'm fine......... I just need to be more careful.
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Anyways, on to your story! The storyline and plot is very intriguing, and makes up for minor details, such as Maxie mentioned. The whole Lily going crazy thing while pregnant was while irritated me the most; just because you're pregnant doesn't mean you're crazy, just like how it's annoying when guys assume it's your period when you're angry at them. I've known many composed, pregnant women. In fact, I've yet to see one go crazy and slap her friends like Lily did. I don't know, I guess I'd expect the characters to act more their age, you know what I mean? Though I do understand- authors of stories tend to make their characters act their age, which does account for most of it.
Well, I'm glad you like it. I'm not trying to be defensive here........ I'm just saying........ the pregnant women I've lived with (six of my Aunts) have had major mood swings........ which made them a little crazy. But, that might be just my family.
Again not trying to be defensive........ but they are only 19/ 20. Not to offend anyone whose that age......... but the people I know who are 19 are....... well....... like James was when he was 15. Again, maybe that's just the people I know........ I'm sure not all 19 year old are that immature.
Anyway, when I get the chance, I'm going to go back and edit some of my story to make it more realistic.
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I do really like the story though; despite these little things, it is very intriguing, and I wish I didn't have to wait for posts now! It was so nice to just read huge blocks of the story at a time.
I know, I hate waiting for posts too. That's why I try to post everyday.
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And you asked me this awhile back, but I forgot to tell you- I deleted Dirty Little Secrets Revealed because it just seemed too strange to be writing it without any of the original readers on SS anymore. I'm nostalgic.
Oh, that's too bad. I really liked it so far.........but that's ok. Your other fics are awesome too.
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Anyways, I hope you're feeling better and up to posting soon. (Wasn't that a super long comment?!)
~gisele
I think that was the longest comment I've ever gotten
! Oh yes, I'm deffinately up to posting......... just give me a while to type it up
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