Hey Katie, you asked me to check out this fic awhile ago and here I am (I finally finished reading it all)

I hope you're ok after your peanut allergy; there was a very publicized story where I live about a girl who died because her boyfriend kissed her two hours after eating a peanut butter sandwhich.

Anyways, on to your story! The storyline and plot is very intriguing, and makes up for minor details, such as Maxie mentioned. The whole Lily going crazy thing while pregnant was while irritated me the most; just because you're pregnant doesn't mean you're crazy, just like how it's annoying when guys assume it's your period when you're angry at them. I've known many composed, pregnant women. In fact, I've yet to see one go crazy and slap her friends like Lily did. I don't know, I guess I'd expect the characters to act more their age, you know what I mean? Though I do understand- authors of stories tend to make their characters act their age, which does account for most of it.

I do really like the story though; despite these little things, it is very intriguing, and I wish I didn't have to wait for posts now! It was so nice to just read huge blocks of the story at a time.

And you asked me this awhile back, but I forgot to tell you- I deleted Dirty Little Secrets Revealed because it just seemed too strange to be writing it without any of the original readers on SS anymore. I'm nostalgic.

Anyways, I hope you're feeling better and up to posting soon. (Wasn't that a super long comment?!)

~gisele