HPfreak I like yours! Heres one of mine tell me what you think!

World of Pretend
Remeber those days
You'd sit in you room
Pretending to be
Something you not

The world of pretend
A majical place
It lets the mind wander
And the imagination flow

As we grow older
That world disappears
We no longer pretend
We stay in reality

I don't want to grow up
I want to pretend
In that magical land
Where my thought's run free