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Sarah Granger · 02-01-2004, 01:21 AM

that's really good! I like your poem best deatheatter. It's really funny.
Here is one of my poems. I kind of like this one....

A hole in my heart,
A big gaping mass.
It shattered to pieces,
Like fine thin glass.
This could not be right,
This could not be true.
My throat was tight,
That December day, 2002.
As I stared into the casket,
Memories flashed by.
She had once put eggs in my basket,
But that was before she had to die.
But the memory that stood out,
Was just the past day.
I had screamed, cried, and shouted,
Like a horse stuck in clay.
Six bullets in her body,
Two in her chest.
My step-dad was naughty,
The doctors tried their best.
If I could hold her one more time,
That would be enough for me.
She was beautiful, sweet, and kind,
I'll miss you, mommy....

What do you think?

02-01-2004, 01:21 AM	#31 (permalink)
Sarah Granger Jarvey Join Date: Nov 2003 Posts: 554	that's really good! I like your poem best deatheatter. It's really funny. Here is one of my poems. I kind of like this one.... A hole in my heart, A big gaping mass. It shattered to pieces, Like fine thin glass. This could not be right, This could not be true. My throat was tight, That December day, 2002. As I stared into the casket, Memories flashed by. She had once put eggs in my basket, But that was before she had to die. But the memory that stood out, Was just the past day. I had screamed, cried, and shouted, Like a horse stuck in clay. Six bullets in her body, Two in her chest. My step-dad was naughty, The doctors tried their best. If I could hold her one more time, That would be enough for me. She was beautiful, sweet, and kind, I'll miss you, mommy.... What do you think?