Originally Posted by Wicked

It was SO WORTH THE WAIT!!!!
Congratulations on a fabulously portrayed kiss.
It took my breath away. I loved how he proclaimed that he is an excellent kisser before he kisses her. Such arrogance, it makes him even more desirable, doesn't it? And the look behind the long lashes...brilliant.
I also loved the idea of his finger tracing her face, very vivid and shows his ease in this.. The language is all of this is very good and creates the proper atmosphere for their first kiss. Using her name properly adds shows he's got feelings which reassures her that he wasn't only intending to 'conquer' her like this, which is good for the readers to know.
YOU DID WELL!!!

I think this is your best post yet, I've enjoyed it immensely.
Give us more please!!!