Haha hey Maxie!

I'm so glad that you've stopped by! I tried to take Lily falling for James slow, but to me, I can see where she's coming from: six previous years of constantly being asked out and probably liking him just a little builds up. I didn't want to take it too slow, though, because in my mind, that's very un-Lily-ish.
I'll take your critisim into good use for Fate! :]
I'll check out your FF. I bet it's lovely! :]
Pickles and Apples, always! I mean... I'd die to protect Bonnie's pickles & apples! I wonder if she would hire me to do that, lol. :p
The end of the story is coming uppp....