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Old 05-21-2006, 09:50 PM   #15 (permalink)
Littlebopeep
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Gryffindor

Hello!

This is littlebopeep, I love your story!!! One thing though, it would be really helpful if you made smaller paragraphs instead of one big one, 'cause it would be easier to read.
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