THis is a thread for my poetry! I've been told that it's good enough to be published but I need other opinions!
Please tell me why
Please tell me why can’t I, breathe when your near me,
when you’re close to me.
I know you know I’m lost in loving you deeply, loving you secretly.

But I crash in my mind, whenever you are near
Getting deaf, dumb, and blind
Just drowning in despair
I’m lost in your flame
It’s burning like the sun
And I Call your name
The moment you are gone.

Tomorrow, I’ll say it all tomorrow
Or the day after tomorrow
I’m sure I’ll tell you then…
That ‘I Love You’